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Compaint letter to the shop about purchased blender which has problem with the light of the device

Compaint letter to the shop about purchased blender which has problem with the light of the device pe3GD
Dear sir, I am writing to complain about a blender I purchased from your shop last friday on the 11th of December. As the assistant was showing me how to switch it on and off the light of the device turned on. However, when I used it at home first time there was no light which made me inconvenience on using it. When I realized this problem I had just sent the blender back to your shop after having been assured by one of the assistants that I would be sent a refund. Furthermore, the assistant who dealt with the matter refused that he would replace it if I had problem with the purchased item. Althought I still have not received one, I believe that you will take to recrify the situatian taking into consideration that I am a regular customer of your shop. I trust this matter will receive your immediate attention. Your faithfully Jane Brown
Dear sir,

I am writing to complain about a blender I
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purchased
from your shop last
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friday
on the 11th of December.

As the assistant was showing me how to switch it on and off the light of the device turned on.

However
, when I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
it at home
first
time there was no light which made me inconvenience on using it. When I realized this problem I had
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just
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
sent
the blender back to your shop after having
been assured
by one of the assistants that I would be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
sent
a refund.

Furthermore
, the assistant who dealt with the matter refused that he would replace it if I had problem with the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
purchased
item.

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Althought
I
still
have not received one, I believe that you will take to
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recrify
the
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situatian
taking into consideration that I am a regular customer of your shop.

I trust this matter will receive your immediate attention.

Your
faithfully


Jane Brown
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IELTS letter Compaint letter to the shop about purchased blender which has problem with the light of the device

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
156 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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