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Mrs. Barrett, an English -speaking women who lives in your town, has advertised for someone to help her in her home for a few hours a day next summer. Write

Mrs. Barrett, an English -speaking women who lives in your town, has advertised for someone to help her in her home for a few hours a day next summer. Write bQJal
I am Sandaruwani Sumanapala who is a resident in South Alta for several years. Actually, I would like to let you know about my willingness to being a helping hand for your house chores where you have advertised last weekend newspaper. Even though I am completely occupied with my academic studies, I would love to work as a volunteer to being a strong contributor for the elderly widow lady like you. As well as, I am an excellent kitchen helper with mouthwatering recipes where we would have wonderful dishes according to your preferences. As per my schedules next summer, all evening lectures will not be conducted where I will be joined with you on weekdays after 2. 00 pm. Unfortunately, my driving practical classes will take my every weekend in summer, therefore; it would be a bit difficult for me to take my time on weekends. I think this is a great opportunity for me to cope with the responsibilities of charity tasks while it would be the blissful inner circle merriment that money can never be granted. If any further information is required please call me via 0719504778. In anticipation waiting for your positive response at earliest. Yours faithfully Sandaruwani Sumanapala
I am
Sandaruwani
Sumanapala
who is a resident in South Alta for several years. Actually, I would like to
let
you know about my willingness to being a helping hand for your
house
chores where you have advertised last weekend newspaper.

Even though
I am completely occupied with my academic studies, I would
love
to work as a volunteer to being a strong contributor for the elderly widow lady like you.
As well
as, I am an excellent kitchen helper with mouthwatering recipes where we would have wonderful dishes according to your preferences.

As per my schedules
next
summer, all evening lectures will not
be conducted
where I will be
joined
with you on weekdays after 2. 00 pm. Unfortunately, my driving practical classes will take my every weekend in summer,
therefore
; it would be a bit difficult for me to take my time on weekends.

I
think
this is a great opportunity for me to cope with the responsibilities of charity tasks while it would be the blissful inner circle merriment that money can never
be granted
.

If
any
further
information
is required
please
call me via 0719504778.

In anticipation waiting for your
positive
response at earliest.

Yours
faithfully


Sandaruwani
Sumanapala
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IELTS letter Mrs. Barrett, an English -speaking women who lives in your town, has advertised for someone to help her in her home for a few hours a day next summer. Write

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  American English
7 paragraphs
201 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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