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moved to new house, letter to friend inviting 1. why changed 2. new home details 3. invite

moved to new house, letter to friend inviting 1. why changed 2. new home details 3. invite 7LJE2
Dear Lisa, It has been ages since I've heard from you. Hope this letter finds you in good health and spirits. I am writing this letter to let you know that I've moved to a new house next to the office. As you know, my old home was far away from office, thus, the commuting took long hours, consequently, shifted here. I must say this house is great and loving it already, it has spacious bedrooms with attached bathroom and balcony, moreover, we can enjoy amenities like convenient underground car parking, fitness center, modern kitchen, amazing hall for hosting the guests. In addition, new feature of affordable dinning opportunity is just a few steps away. Well, what are your plans this weekend? Can't you visit, we will have great time and fun at our new home. The new address is 1596 Bystreet Gandhinagar colony, Hyderabad. Hope to see you this weekend. Keep in touch. Best regards,
Dear Lisa,

It has been ages since I've heard from you. Hope this letter finds you in
good
health and spirits. I am writing this letter to
let
you know that I've
moved
to a
new
house
next
to the office.

As you know, my
old
home was far away from office,
thus
, the commuting took long hours,
consequently
, shifted here. I
must
say this
house
is great and loving it already, it has spacious bedrooms with attached bathroom and balcony,
moreover
, we can enjoy amenities like convenient underground car parking, fitness center, modern kitchen, amazing hall for hosting the guests.
In addition
,
new
feature of affordable dinning opportunity is
just
a few steps away.

Well, what are your plans this weekend? Can't you visit, we will have great time and fun at our
new
home. The
new
address is 1596
Bystreet
Gandhinagar
colony, Hyderabad. Hope to
see
you this weekend.
Keep
in touch.

Best regards,
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IELTS letter moved to new house, letter to friend inviting 1. why changed 2. new home details 3. invite

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  American English
5 paragraphs
156 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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