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Motivational letter Stipendium Hungaricum

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Good afternoon, dear professors! My name is Viktoryia Paniushenka and I am writing to introduce myself, my educational experience and express my interest in applying to the programme. Since I was a student in gymnasium I was interested in International relations and I decided to connect my future profession and this field of knowledge. In 2020 I matriculated Belarus State Economic University and The School of International Relations. During the time I spent in university I was studying such interesting disciplines as World Economy, Politology, Cultural Studies, The Basics of Diplomatic and Consular Service and other disciplines. I found myself really interested in the field of world economy and took part in the scientific and practical conference of students "National Economy of the Republic of Belarus: Problems and Development Prospects". I also wrote articles and had a publication in the collection of scientific articles "Actual problems of the humanities and socio-economic sciences within the EAEU". During my education in university I was able to delve into the topic of International relations, among it I found out that International relations are much more complex and comprehensive, as well I understood that International relations are the concept that plays a critical role in many fields of life. I also found out that to become a real professional in your chosen field you should always be active, open-minded to new opportunities and always improve your knowledge and skills. That’s why I decided to apply to this programme. As a student of the School of International Economic Relations I consider Stipendium Hungaricum scholarship programme to be a source of invaluable and priceless knowledge that can help me build understanding of the international relations on a more comprehensive level. It is also a source of experience which give me ability to improve my communication skills and language skills. As well being part of the programme is such an honor for me. Its about interacting and communicating with people from all over the world. For me it’s an unique opportunity to visit another country, become a part of totally different cultural space, obtain a high-quality education and find out the difference between Belarusian curiculum and European one. It’s a great opportunity discover a new country and its culture. As Ive never visited Hungary and only have seen pictures in the internet, Iam waiting forward to see its beautiful landscapes, nature and magnificent architecture. I would like to get acquainted with its traditions, its inhabitants.
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afternoon, dear professors! My name is
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Viktoryia
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Paniushenka and
I am writing to introduce myself, my educational experience and express my interest in applying to the
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programme
.

Since I was a student in gymnasium I
was interested
in
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International
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relations
and I decided to connect my future profession and this
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field
of knowledge. In
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2020 I
matriculated Belarus State Economic University and The School of
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International
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Relations
. During the time I spent in university I was studying such interesting disciplines as World Economy,
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Politology
, Cultural Studies, The Basics of Diplomatic and Consular Service and other disciplines. I found myself
really
interested in the
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field
of world economy and
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took part
in the scientific and practical conference of students
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"
National Economy of the Republic of Belarus: Problems and Development Prospects
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"
. I
also
wrote articles and had a publication in the collection of scientific articles
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"
Actual problems of the humanities and
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socio-economic
sciences within the
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EAEU
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"
.

During my education in university I was able to delve into the topic of
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International
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relations
, among
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it
I found out that
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International
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relations
are much more complex and comprehensive,
as well
I understood that
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International
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relations
are the concept that plays a critical role in
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many
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fields
of life.

I
also
found out that to become a real professional in your chosen
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field
you should always be active, open-minded to new opportunities and always
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improve
your knowledge and
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skills
. That’s why I decided to apply to this
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programme
.

As a student of the School of
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International
Economic
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Relations
I consider
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Stipendium
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Hungaricum
scholarship
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programme
to be a source of invaluable and priceless knowledge that can
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help
me build understanding of the
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international
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relations
on a more comprehensive level.

It is
also
a source of experience which give me ability to
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improve
my communication
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skills
and language
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skills
.

As
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well being
part of the
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programme
is such an honor for me.

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about interacting and communicating with
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people
from all over the world.

For me it’s
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an
unique opportunity to visit another country, become a part of
totally
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different
cultural space, obtain a high-quality education and find out the difference between Belarusian
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curiculum
and European one.

It’s a great opportunity discover a new country and its culture. As
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Ive
never visited Hungary and
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only
have
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seen
pictures
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in the internet
,
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Iam
waiting forward to
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see
its
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beautiful
landscapes, nature and magnificent architecture. I would like to
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get
acquainted with its traditions, its inhabitants.
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IELTS letter Motivational letter Stipendium Hungaricum

Letter
  American English
10 paragraphs
408 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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