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Motivation letter for a computer science program

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Dear Selection Committee, I am a mobile developer at Infodat in Agadir, and with this letter, I hereby wish to state my interest and strong determination for joining the Stipendium Hungaricum Scholarship Programme and continuing my master’s degree in the field of computer science in Hungary, which is a field quite relevant to my previous educational background. I accomplished my university diploma of technology in Informatics Engineering, my bachelor's degree in Mobile Applications Engineering, and my high school diploma in Mathematical Sciences. Based on my rich background in computer science and mathematics, I strongly feel that continuing my master's degree in Hungary will be of great relevance to both my career and my personal development. I plan to learn deeply about computer science to gain the ability to contribute to what's going to make the future of humanity great. Continuing my master's degree is very important for me to reach my goal of building my own Moroccan company in the IT field. It's not easy but I am certain that with a degree from one of the most prestigious, superior, and respected Hungarian universities, I can do it. This information has been proven to me by my online research and by the testimonials of three of my friends that went to complete their master's degrees in Hungary. And two of these universities that I'm talking about are Eötvös Loránd University and Széchenyi István University, I read every detail about their computer science programs and I believe that both of these programs would be an excellent fit for me, they are both great, I would have put them both as my first choice if I could. My interest in computers began when I was 10 years old when my big brother and big sister united and convinced my parents to buy us a computer. At first, I only used the computer to play games, but one day I hear my brother talking about called Java, he told me that it's a programming language, of course, I had no idea what he was talking about so I did some research, and when I found that people can build there own websites I was mind blown, and I was interested in this field ever since. I started following online tutorials to solve the problems I have encountered on my way. It was really interesting and empowering to see myself create something from the scratch. I am very interested in studying in Hungary because it has high-quality education and it is a country of immense beauty and fascinating history, as well as a rich natural landscape, and I only heard good things about it from my friends that went to complete their studies there. Hungary is also a modern and safe country, and the cost of living is among the lowest in Europe. It is a diverse, multicultural nation with lots of fun experiences for foreign students. And also Hungary is the land of inventors in various fields such as Telephone Exchange, Microsoft Excel, Plasma TV, and Rubik's Cube. . . Growing up I always thought that I was special, throughout my life I recognized that either we are all special or none of us are. After I came to the conclusion that helping each other is probably the best way to live, and now I want to help my country. I read a quote that says "Be the change you want to see in the world", and I want to see everyone working, making this country the best version of itself, and that's where my initial idea of my goal came to build my own company and recruit people and actually make some change. So after completing my master's degree in Hungary, I will go back to Morocco and devote myself to reaching the highest levels in the IT world by applying my newly acquired knowledge and competencies and achieving my goals. In conclusion, I would like to reconfirm that I am eager to gain new experiences, improve my skills and broaden my understanding of the dynamic IT world, and I am persuaded that studying in either Eötvös Loránd University or Széchenyi István University in computer science would contribute to my career development in the best possible way.
Dear Selection Committee,

I am a mobile developer at
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Infodat
in Agadir, and with this letter, I hereby wish to state my interest and strong determination for joining the
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Stipendium
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Hungaricum
Scholarship
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Programme
and continuing my master’s
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degree
in the
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field
of computer
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science
in Hungary, which is a
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field
quite relevant to my previous educational background. I accomplished my
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university
diploma of technology in Informatics Engineering, my bachelor's
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degree
in Mobile Applications Engineering, and my high school diploma in Mathematical Sciences.

Based on my rich background in computer
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science
and mathematics, I
strongly
feel that continuing my
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master's
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degree
in Hungary will be of great relevance to both my career and my personal development. I plan to learn
deeply
about computer
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science
to gain the ability to contribute to what's going to
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make
the future of humanity great. Continuing my
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master's
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degree
is
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very
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important
for me to reach my goal of building my
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own
Moroccan
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company
in the IT
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field
. It's not easy
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but
I am certain that with a
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degree
from one of the most prestigious, superior, and respected Hungarian
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universities
, I can do it. This information has
been proven
to me by my online research and by the testimonials of three of my friends that went to complete their
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master's
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degrees
in Hungary. And two of these
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universities
that I'm talking about are Eötvös
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Loránd
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University
and
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Széchenyi
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István
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University
, I read every detail about their computer
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science
programs and I believe that both of these programs would be an excellent fit for me, they are both great, I would have put them both as my
first
choice if I could.

My interest in computers began when I was 10 years
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when my
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big
brother and
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big
sister united and convinced my parents to
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buy
us a computer. At
first
, I
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only
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used
the computer to play games,
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but
one day I hear my brother talking about called Java, he
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told
me that it's a programming language,
of course
, I had no
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idea
what he was talking about
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so
I did
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some
research, and when I found that
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people
can build there
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own
websites I was mind blown, and I
was interested
in this
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field
ever since. I
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started
following online tutorials to solve the problems I have encountered on my way. It was
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really interesting
and empowering to
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see
myself create something from the scratch.

I am
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very
interested in studying in Hungary
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because
it has high-quality education and it is a
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country
of immense beauty and fascinating history,
as well
as a rich natural landscape, and I
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only
heard
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good
things about it from my friends that went to complete their studies there. Hungary is
also
a modern and safe
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country
, and the cost of living is among the lowest in Europe. It is a diverse, multicultural nation with lots of fun experiences for foreign students. And
also
Hungary is the land of inventors in various
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fields
such as Telephone Exchange, Microsoft Excel, Plasma TV, and Rubik's Cube.
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Growing up I always
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thought
that I was special, throughout my life I recognized that either we are all special or none of us are. After I came to the conclusion that helping each other is
probably
the best way to
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live
, and
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now
I want to
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help
my
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country
. I read a quote that says
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Be the
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change
you want to
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see
in the world
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, and I want to
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see
everyone working, making this
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the best version of itself, and that's where my initial
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idea
of my goal came to build my
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own
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company
and recruit
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people
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make
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change
.
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So
after completing my
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master's
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degree
in Hungary, I will go back to Morocco and devote myself to reaching the highest levels in the IT world by applying my
newly
acquired knowledge and competencies and achieving my goals.

In conclusion
, I would like to reconfirm that I am eager to gain new experiences,
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improve
my
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skills
and broaden my understanding of the dynamic IT world, and I
am persuaded
that studying in either Eötvös
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Loránd
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University
or
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Széchenyi
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István
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University
in computer
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science
would contribute to my career development in the best possible way.
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IELTS letter Motivation letter for a computer science program

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  American English
7 paragraphs
705 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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