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You are going to spend some time with your Scottish friend Douglas next Saturday.

You are going to spend some time with your Scottish friend Douglas next Saturday. 7pnY2
Dear Douglas, How are you? The last time I met you was 11 months ago. I am writing a letter to you from Vietnam. I will be in Scotland in two days, and I will be there for two weeks. Do you have free time at weekend? I would like to meet you on Saturday if you have free time. I want to take some nice pictures as a souvenir and eat the typical food here. We can go to some famous places, beautiful scenery. Tired of walking and walking, then eat delicious food and specialties here. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Best wishes,
Dear Douglas,

How are you? The last time I met you was 11 months ago. I am writing a letter to you from Vietnam. I will be in Scotland in two days, and I will be there for two weeks. Do you have free time at weekend? I would like to
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nice pictures as a souvenir and eat the typical food here. We can go to
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some
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places,
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scenery. Tired of walking and walking, then eat delicious food and specialties here. I look forward to hearing from you
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Best wishes,
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IELTS letter You are going to spend some time with your Scottish friend Douglas next Saturday.

Letter
  American English
3 paragraphs
107 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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