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A new thing of mine-took part in a sport competition

A new thing of mine-took part in a sport competition rkALp

Hi Robbie, I've been thinking about you. How are you doing? I am very excited to let you know that I have taken part in a sport competition at the weekend. It is a swimming competition actually. When I first entered the competition zone, I was excited and nervous at the same time. The other contestants there looked so enthusiastic and full of energy. But I practiced a lot for that competition, I won't know until I try but I'll give it my all. As a result, I’m the winner, I'm very honored to win the first prize. This competition helped to bring a positive change inside me greatly. I was grateful to be there and meet all the talented people. That’s just a new thing of mine that I want to tell you. Waiting to see you soon. Warm wishes, Tran Thanh Ngan

Hi Robbie,

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 you know that I have taken part in a sport You use this word too often, consider replacing it withchampionshipclashmeetingtournamentfighttrial
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 prize. This You use this word too often, consider replacing it withchampionshipclashmeetingtournamentfighttrial
competition
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 inside me greatly
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 all the talented This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
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. That’s This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
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 you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
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Warm wishes,

Tran Thanh Possible spelling mistake found.NGANGNNanNaan
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