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letter about competitions

letter about competitions peA10

Hello. Congrats! It’s wonderful! I wish you and your sister even more victories! How were you feeling when you found out about it? Were you proud of her? When I was ten I participated in chess competition. It was exhausting. Two days of four hour games. There were many competitions like this and I even won there several times, but now I am not playing chess any more so I don’t think I will take part in those competitions any more.

Hello. Congrats! It’s wonderful! I wish you and your sister even more victories! How were you feeling when you found out about it? Were you proud of her?

“When” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
When
 I was ten I participated in chess competition. It was exhausting. Two days of four hour games. There were This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 competitions like this and I even won there several times, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 I am not playing chess Did you mean the adverb "anymore"?anymore
any more
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 I don’t This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 I will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :participate
take part
 in those competitions Did you mean the adverb "anymore"?anymore
any more
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