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giới thiệu về trường lớp bản thân lớp học

giới thiệu về trường lớp bản thân lớp học 70nDn
hello. my name is Quynh Trang. i'm 12 year old and i am studying at Cat Thinh junior high school. i was in class 7A with 37 members. our class teacher's name is Lan. my friends are very friendly. they are great. we often play volleyball together. we have 13 subject: mathematics, literature, history, English, geography, physics, technology, informatics, physical education, art, music, biology and civics. we all love to learn English. this is my school. this school is named Cat Thinh junior high school. the school is quite old and small. but it stuck with me from day one. the school has 15 classrooms and has nearly 600 students. there are many teachers in the school. i love school and classroom. thank you for listening
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hello
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my
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Quynh
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Trang
.
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i'm
12 year
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and
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i
am studying at Cat
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Thinh
junior high
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school
.
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i
was in
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class
7A with 37 members.
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our
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class
teacher's name is
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Lan
.
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my
friends are
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very
friendly.
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they
are great.
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we
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often
play volleyball together.
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we
have 13 subject: mathematics, literature, history, English, geography, physics, technology, informatics, physical education, art, music, biology and civics.
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we
all
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love
to learn English.
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this
is my
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school
.
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this
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is named
Cat
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Thinh
junior high
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school
.
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the
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school
is quite
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old
and
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small
.
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but
it stuck with me from day one.
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the
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school
has 15 classrooms and has
nearly
600 students.
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there
are
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many
teachers in the
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school
.
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i
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love
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school
and classroom.
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thank
you for
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listening
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IELTS letter giới thiệu về trường lớp bản thân lớp học

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
125 words
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text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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