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letter to my Australian friend

letter to my Australian friend m8AXq

Hello. Congrats! It’s wonderful! I wish you and your sister even more victories! How were you feeling when you found out about it? Were you proud of her? When I was ten I participated in chess competition. It was exhausting. Two days of four hour games. There were many competitions like this and I even won there several times, but now I wouldn’t like to enter those competitions because I am not playing chess any more. I soon will take part in swimming competition so I will text you about it. And how about you? What competitions did you participate in? I am waiting for a reply letter. Sincerely Valera

Hello. Congrats! It’s wonderful! I wish you and your sister even more victories! How were you feeling when you found out about it? Were you proud of her?

“When” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
When
 I was ten I participated in chess You use this word too often, consider replacing it withchampionshipclashmeetingtournamentfighttrial
competition
. It was exhausting. Two days of four hour games. There were This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withchampionshipclashmeetingtournamentfighttrial
competitions
 like this and I even won there several times, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 I wouldn’t like to enter those You use this word too often, consider replacing it withchampionshipclashmeetingtournamentfighttrial
competitions
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 I am not playing chess Did you mean the adverb "anymore"?anymore
any more
. I This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :participate
take part
 in swimming You use this word too often, consider replacing it withchampionshipclashmeetingtournamentfighttrial
competition
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 I will text you about it.

And how about you? What You use this word too often, consider replacing it withchampionshipclashmeetingtournamentfighttrial
competitions
 did you participate in? I am waiting for a reply letter.

Sincerely


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