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motivation letter for apply in italy university

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My adolescence coincided with the peak of computer game use, and I spent most of my free time playing with minicomputers, and because of my curiosity, I was eager to learn how these games worked. In my early high school years, I took a few courses like basic computer science and its application in school, which intensified my interest in computers. In the summer of that year, I took several computer-related skills, which made me more determined to choose a computer science course at university. After entering the university and consulting with academic advisors, I chose the field of information technology engineering. The course syllabus not only provided me with the basics of computer science and networking but also gave me the opportunity to become familiar with programming languages and gain good information about my future specialization. I was able to graduate on time from Payam Noor. I even got first grades in some classes like Information Storage and Retrieving, Algorithms Design, and Artificial intelligence. Due to my interest in learning this field and also to improve my knowledge, I took several courses to gain experience and strengthen the sense of teamwork in volunteer projects such as e-citizen and also worked as an instructor in workshops that made me gain valuable experiences. Because of my experience, I was able to get a job at Goldis Educational Ins as an IT Support Specialist and also as a helpdesk at Pishtazan Fannavari Ettelaat. Being in a different work environment, I was able to acquire various programming skills. In the process of writing an article on privacy-preserving, I became acquainted with Italian universities and leading professors in computer science and data science, and this encouraged me to seek more comprehensive information in this field at Italian universities. I realized that Italy, and especially the university. . . is one of the best in this field, and it prompted me to apply for a master's degree.
My adolescence coincided with the peak of computer game
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use
, and I spent most of my free time playing with minicomputers, and
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because
of my curiosity, I was eager to learn how these games worked. In my early high school years, I took a few
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courses
like basic computer
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science
and its application in school, which intensified my interest in computers. In the summer of that year, I took several computer-related
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skills
, which made me more determined to choose a computer
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science
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course
at university.

After entering the
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university
and consulting with academic advisors, I chose the
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field
of
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information
technology engineering. The
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course
syllabus not
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only
provided me with the basics of computer
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science
and networking
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but
also
gave me the opportunity to become familiar with programming languages and gain
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good
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information
about my future specialization. I was able to graduate on time from
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Payam
Noor. I even
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got
first
grades in
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some
classes like
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Information
Storage and Retrieving, Algorithms Design, and Artificial intelligence.

Due to my interest in learning this
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field
and
also
to
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improve
my knowledge, I took several
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courses
to gain experience and strengthen the sense of teamwork in volunteer projects such as e-citizen and
also
worked as an instructor in workshops that made me gain valuable experiences.
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Because
of my experience, I was able to
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get
a job at
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Goldis
Educational Ins as an IT Support Specialist and
also
as a
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helpdesk
at
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Pishtazan
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Fannavari
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Ettelaat
. Being in a
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different
work environment, I was able to acquire various programming
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skills
.

In the process of writing an article on privacy-preserving, I became acquainted with Italian
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universities
and leading professors in computer
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science
and data
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science
, and this encouraged me to seek more comprehensive
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information
in this
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field
at Italian
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universities
. I realized that Italy, and
especially
the
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university
.
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is
one of the best in this
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field
, and it prompted me to apply for a master's degree.
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IELTS letter motivation letter for apply in italy university

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  American English
4 paragraphs
322 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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