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You recently bought something and lost it

You recently bought something and lost it BWNXV

Dear sir or Madam, I am writing in hope that you can help me, I come across a real difficulty, I lost my precious laptop that my father bought me. On the advent of my birthday my father purchased me a modern laptop. Yesterday, when I was working with my laptop, my comrades arrived and then we started to go out 12 hours later I realized I forgot my laptop in your store, I returned and I was looking for my laptop, however, l did not find it. Tomorrow I should travel to Toronto for my siblings wedding ceremony and its so significant to bring my laptop hence, I am looking forward to your cooperation.

Dear sir or Madam, I am writing in hope that you can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 me, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 across a real difficulty, I lost my precious You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdesktop computerworkstationminicomputer
laptop
 that my father This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchased
bought
 me. On the advent of my birthday my father This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
purchased
 me a modern You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdesktop computerworkstationminicomputer
laptop
. Yesterday, when I was working with my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdesktop computerworkstationminicomputer
laptop
, my comrades Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).arrived, and
arrived and
 then we This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 to go out 12 hours later I realized I forgot my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdesktop computerworkstationminicomputer
laptop
 in your store, I Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).returned, and
returned and
 I was looking for my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdesktop computerworkstationminicomputer
laptop
, however
, l did not find it. Tomorrow I should travel to Toronto for my siblings wedding ceremony and Did you mean "it's" (="it is") instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?it'sit is
its
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 significant to bring my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdesktop computerworkstationminicomputer
laptop
hence
, I am looking forward to your cooperation. 