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Write an email to the organiser for Conversation Club because you want to join. Ask about the day and the time. Ask about the other members of the club. Tell her why you want to join the club. Tell her your level of English and ask if the Club would be good for you.

Write an email to the organiser for Conversation Club because you want to join. Ask about the day and the time. Ask about the other members of the club. Tell her why you want to join the club. Tell her your level of English and ask if the Club would be good for you. xPAXQ

Hi I would say where is the club english? what is the time I would going there if you don't mind, I would ask about the day? which is day you has a club? I will going to hupperier there it is nice and the i have seen skycaper there it is had a pupler colour lights however the coming rain and of course it is had coordinator on the contrary, had drink lemon-mint & fruit mix with discourse My level english is C1 I have a lexis advance and grammar and i could speak English very well I have a vital English and numerous dialect

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I would say where is the club Possible spelling mistake found.English
english
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This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterWhat
what
 is the time I would The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: "go"go
going
 there if you don't mind,

I would ask about the day? This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterWhich
which
 is day you The pronoun 'you' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: "have", "haven"havehaven
has
 a club?

I will The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: "go"go
going
 to Possible spelling mistake found.superiorsupporterSuperiorsupplierhappierpuppeteer
hupperier
 there it is nice and the Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
Possible spelling mistake found.sky caperskycap er
skycaper


there it is had
 a Possible spelling mistake found.pullerpurpler
pupler
Possible spelling mistake. 'colour' is British English.color
colour
 lights however
 the coming rain

and of course
 it is had
 coordinator

on the contrary
, had drink lemon-mint & fruit mix with discourse

My level Possible spelling mistake found.English
english
 is C1 I have a lexis advance and grammar and Did you mean "I"?I
i
 could speak English This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 well

I have a vital English and numerous dialect

IELTS letter Write an email to the organiser for Conversation Club because you want to join. Ask about the day and the time. Ask about the other members of the club. Tell her why you want to join the club. Tell her your level of English and ask if the Club would be good for you.

Letter

American English

10 paragraphs

105 words

This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1

4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.0

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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