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Motivation Letter for a Master's Degree

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Motivation Letter for a Master's Degree Admissions Office (Graduate Studies) Concordia University 1455 Boulevard de Maisonneuve O, Montréal, QC, H3G 1M8, Canada September 16, 2020 Dear Sir/Madam, I hope this letter reaches you in good spirits. My name is Mohamed Mostafa Elhamwy and I would like to apply for a Master’s in Water Resources Engineering implemented by Concordia University starting January 2020. I am a highly motivated young professional who perceives this degree to be beneficial for my future career in Irrigation Design. My strong academic background in Agricultural Engineering makes me a strong candidate for this competitive program. I hold a bachelor’s degree in Agricultural Engineering from Alexandria University, Egypt. Since then, I have clearly determined my career goals and would like to continue my education at your esteemed university. I would like to learn more about [SPECIFIC SUBJECTS] and after looking over your curricula, I believe that the university offers the best opportunities for me to educate myself further in this field. I believe that my education and career offer a solid foundation. However, through the university’s master’s program, I hope to develop and learn more about the field of Water Resources Engineering. Attached to this letter are the documentary requirements necessary for my admission. Thank you very much for your consideration. Sincerely, Mohamed M. Elhamwy
Motivation Letter for a Master's Degree

Admissions Office (Graduate Studies)

Concordia
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University 1455
Boulevard
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de
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Maisonneuve
O,

Montréal, QC, H3G 1M8, Canada

September 16, 2020

Dear Sir/Madam,

I hope this letter reaches you in
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good
spirits.

My name
is Mohamed
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Mostafa
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Elhamwy
and I would like to apply for a Master’s in Water Resources Engineering implemented by Concordia
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
University
starting January 2020. I am a
highly
motivated young professional who perceives this degree to be beneficial for my future career in Irrigation Design. My strong academic background in Agricultural Engineering
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
makes
me a strong candidate for this competitive program.

I hold a bachelor’s degree in Agricultural Engineering from Alexandria
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University
, Egypt. Since then, I have
clearly
determined my career goals and would like to continue my education at your esteemed university.

I would like to learn more about [SPECIFIC SUBJECTS] and after looking over your curricula, I believe that the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
university
offers the best opportunities for me to educate myself
further
in this field.

I believe that my education and career offer a solid foundation.
However
, through the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
university’s
master’s program, I hope to develop and learn more about the field of Water Resources Engineering.

Attached to this letter are the documentary requirements necessary for my admission. Thank you
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very
much for your consideration.

Sincerely
,

Mohamed M.
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Elhamwy
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IELTS letter Motivation Letter for a Master's Degree

Letter
  American English
13 paragraphs
217 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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