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letter about town centers in my country

letter about town centers in my country K3266

Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Mahmoud Shaker, and I am an old resident in Alexandria. I am writing this letter in response to the last week article talking about the similarities in the town centers in my town. The first point I want to raise is that although I do not totally in agreement with the opinion mentioned, I believe that the author has a valid point when it comes to the overall size of the centers which mostly consists of a single floor only. Another thing I want to discuss is that my town centers have unique features that stand them out from other centers such as the presence of an outdoor cafés and restaurants that are designed in a spectacular architectural features which represents the historical eras of my town in which it was famous for. One final issue I forgot to mention is that I would be honored to accompany the writer in a tour where I will be trying my best to show the beauty of my town that lies within its mesmerizing natural sceneries along with the modern facilities and infrastructures. I am looking forward to hearing from you at your convenience. Best Regards, Mahmoud Shaker

Dear Sir or Madam,

My name is Mahmoud Shaker, and I am an This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
 resident in Alexandria. I am writing this letter in response to the last week article talking about the similarities in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcitymunicipalitymetropolistownship
town
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centers
 in my town.

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 point I want to raise is that although I do not totally
 in agreement with the opinion mentioned, I believe that the author has a valid point when it This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approachesarrives
comes
 to the overall
 size of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withheartplacehub
centers
 which mostly
 consists of a single floor This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
.

Another thing I want to discuss is that my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcitymunicipalitymetropolistownship
town
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withheartplacehub
centers
 have unique features that stand them out from other You use this word too often, consider replacing it withheartplacehub
centers
 such as the presence of an outdoor cafés and restaurants that are designed
 in a spectacular architectural features which represents the historical eras of my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcitymunicipalitymetropolistownship
town
 in which it was This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:well-known
famous
 for.

One final issue I forgot to mention is that I would be honored
 to accompany the writer in a tour where I will be trying my best to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstrateportrayindicatedisplay
show
 the beauty of my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcitymunicipalitymetropolistownship
town
 that lies within its mesmerizing natural sceneries along with the modern facilities and infrastructures.

I am looking forward to hearing from you at your convenience.

Best Regards,

Mahmoud Shaker