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letter about town centers in my country

letter about town centers in my country K3266
Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Mahmoud Shaker, and I am an old resident in Alexandria. I am writing this letter in response to the last week article talking about the similarities in the town centers in my town. The first point I want to raise is that although I do not totally in agreement with the opinion mentioned, I believe that the author has a valid point when it comes to the overall size of the centers which mostly consists of a single floor only. Another thing I want to discuss is that my town centers have unique features that stand them out from other centers such as the presence of an outdoor cafés and restaurants that are designed in a spectacular architectural features which represents the historical eras of my town in which it was famous for. One final issue I forgot to mention is that I would be honored to accompany the writer in a tour where I will be trying my best to show the beauty of my town that lies within its mesmerizing natural sceneries along with the modern facilities and infrastructures. I am looking forward to hearing from you at your convenience. Best Regards, Mahmoud Shaker
Dear Sir or Madam,

My name is Mahmoud Shaker, and I am an
old
resident in Alexandria. I am writing this letter in response to the last week article talking about the similarities in the
town
centers
in my town.

The
first
point I want to raise is that although I do not
totally
in agreement with the opinion mentioned, I believe that the author has a valid point when it
comes
to the
overall
size of the
centers
which
mostly
consists of a single floor
only
.

Another thing I want to discuss is that my
town
centers
have unique features that stand them out from other
centers
such as the presence of an outdoor cafés and restaurants that
are designed
in a spectacular architectural features which represents the historical eras of my
town
in which it was
famous
for.

One final issue I forgot to mention is that I would
be honored
to accompany the writer in a tour where I will be trying my best to
show
the beauty of my
town
that lies within its mesmerizing natural sceneries along with the modern facilities and infrastructures.

I am looking forward to hearing from you at your convenience.

Best Regards,

Mahmoud Shaker
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IELTS letter letter about town centers in my country

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  American English
8 paragraphs
202 words
6.5
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