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Your friend is about to celebrate a landmark birthday and would welcome suggestions as to how it should be celebrate Write a letter to your friend. In your letter  Say what type of party should be held e.g. themed, fancy dress, black tie event.  Suggest a suitable venue  Make recommendation as to entertainment e.g. DJ, jazz band etc

Your friend is about to celebrate a landmark birthday and would welcome suggestions as to how it should be celebrate Write a letter to your friend. In your letter  Say what type of party should be held e. g. themed, fancy dress, black tie event.  Suggest a suitable venue  Make recommendation as to entertainment e. g. DJ, jazz band etc nWEo

Dear Evelyn, I hope you're doing well, and are excited for your sweet 16 birthday next month. You should celebrate this special occasion with style, and throw a grand party to enjoy with your friends and family. Starting with a specific concept, I would recommend that you to hold a vampire themed party, as they are very popular among teenagers. This darkly popular theme will absolutely guarantee that everyone will have a blast because today’s youth die for costume centered parties. After considering the theme, you should definitely think about a nice spot for the event. I know a great place where you can organize the event; it is located by the river, and has a nice lighting arrangement for vampire themes. As an added bonus, the site also provides a wide range of delicious catering services that connect to a ghastly party theme. With theme and location out of the way, let’s talk about musical entertainment, which you know I am head over heels about since it plays an important role in setting the party mood. I would suggest that you book legendary theme party band Dead Man Fall, as they are available on your birthday, and will wear vampire outfits. With these suggestions, I know you will have the party of the year! . Yours sincerely, Johnny

Dear Evelyn,

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Yours sincerely
,

Johnny