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You have recently bought a bag but it is not a very healthily. Write a letter of complaint to the manager of the company where you bought the item

You have recently bought a bag but it is not a very healthily. Write a letter of complaint to the manager of the company where you bought the item 5ArGV
Dear Sir. I wish to complain about the bag what I purchased it on Monday in your Mall. I am complaining due to the fact that it is inferior. To resolve this problem I would like to supersede this item. When I first learned of this problem, I contacted with John who is your secretary in tenth of June at your company and told me that nothing could be done about my issue. I believe that is response is unfair owing to the fact that you said to me the bag what I bought last week was very healthily. However in fact it is not that what you said. I would like to written statement explaining your company's position and what you will do about my grievance. I look forward to hearing from you as soon as possible to resolve this conundrum. If I do not hear from you within 3 days I will file complains with the appropriate consumer agencies and consider my legal alternatives. I am enclosing copies of my receipt. I may be interconnected at the above address and phone number. Sincerely. Sarah.
Dear Sir. I wish to complain about the bag what I
purchased
it on Monday in your Mall. I am complaining due to the fact that it is inferior. To resolve this problem I would like to supersede this item. When I
first
learned of this problem, I contacted with John who is your secretary in tenth of June at your
company
and
told
me that nothing could
be done
about my issue. I believe
that is
response is unfair owing to the fact that you said to me the bag what I
bought
last week was
very
healthily
.
However
in fact it is not that what you said. I would like to written statement explaining your
company
's position and what you will do about my grievance. I look forward to hearing from you as
soon
as possible to resolve this conundrum. If I do not hear from you within 3 days I will file complains with the appropriate consumer agencies and consider my legal alternatives. I am enclosing copies of my receipt. I may
be interconnected
at the above address and phone number.
Sincerely
. Sarah.
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IELTS letter You have recently bought a bag but it is not a very healthily. Write a letter of complaint to the manager of the company where you bought the item

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
186 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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