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You see this advertisement in an English language newspaper. Apply to the manager for job.

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Dear Mrs. Benson II am writing this letter for the reason of applying for a job, which was advertised in an English newspaper published last week. I work in a secondary school as a teacher of English to the Elementary and middle-aged classes. I am obliged to teach them for speaking English in extracurricular activities. I would read up various stories, fairy tales, and then we are used to sharing with them proposing to make speak fluently. For this occasion, I need to be aware of up-to-date literature and background. I will be grateful if you think of me suitable for this job as a librarian in your International bookshop. I look forward to hearing from you a positive reply to my application.
Dear Mrs. Benson II
Did you mean "am I"?
am
writing this letter for the reason of applying for a job, which
was advertised
in an English newspaper published last week. I work in a secondary school as a teacher of English to the Elementary and middle-aged classes. I
am obliged
to teach them for speaking English in extracurricular activities.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
would read up various stories, fairy tales, and then we are
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
to sharing with them proposing to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
speak
fluently
. For this occasion, I need to be aware of up-to-date literature and background. I will be grateful if you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
of me suitable for this job as a librarian in your International bookshop. I look forward to hearing from you a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
positive
reply to my application.
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IELTS letter You see this advertisement in an English language newspaper. Apply to the manager for job.

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
123 words
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text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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