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Dear Mrs. Benson II am writing this letter for the reason of applying for a job, which was advertised in an English newspaper published last week. I work in a secondary school as a teacher of English to the Elementary and middle-aged classes. I am obliged to teach them for speaking English in extracurricular activities. I would read up various stories, fairy tales, and then we are used to sharing with them proposing to make speak fluently. For this occasion, I need to be aware of up-to-date literature and background. I will be grateful if you think of me suitable for this job as a librarian in your International bookshop. I look forward to hearing from you a positive reply to my application.

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 writing this letter for the reason of applying for a job, which was advertised
 in an English newspaper published last week. I work in a secondary school as a teacher of English to the Elementary and middle-aged classes. I am obliged
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positive
 reply to my application. 

IELTS letter You see this advertisement in an English language newspaper. Apply to the manager for job.

Letter

American English

1 paragraphs

123 words

This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1

4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.5

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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