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Dear Sir or Madam, Recently, A meeting for my company was held in your superb hotel. The company workers enjoyed the experience so far in the hotel. The cultural theme and music made my coworkers feel comfortable and relaxed! For instance, the Indian song played by the Bollywood music group in the hotel’s restaurant was appealing! Still, there was a minor issue there that my mates mentioned and talked about; I think they weren’t interested in it. The problem was about the food selection in the restaurant; they said they didn’t enjoy the timing of that food. The meal was western, but the theme and music were Indian; They expected Indian food instead of Western food. However, I think this minor issue may not satisfy the next customers too. In my opinion, you should pay more attention to the food details like timing and taste. I think it was better to choose eastern food as it’s matched with the restaurant theme! You may select a different food if you change the look and the theme of your hotel’s restaurant. Regards, M. Bagher Abiat
Dear Sir or Madam,

Recently, A meeting for my
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company
was held
in your superb hotel. The
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company
workers enjoyed the experience
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so
far in the hotel.

The cultural
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theme
and music made my coworkers feel comfortable and relaxed!
For instance
, the Indian song played by the Bollywood music group in the hotel’s restaurant was appealing!

Still
, there was a minor issue there that my mates mentioned and talked about; I
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think
they weren’t interested in it. The problem was about the
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food
selection in the restaurant; they said they didn’t enjoy the timing of that
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food
. The meal was western,
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but
the
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theme
and music were Indian; They
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expected
Indian
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food
instead
of Western food.

However
, I
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think
this minor issue may not satisfy the
next
customers too. In my opinion, you should pay more attention to the
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food
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details
like timing and taste. I
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think
it was better to choose eastern
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food
as it’s matched with the restaurant
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theme
! You may select a
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different
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food
if you
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change
the look and the
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theme
of your hotel’s restaurant.

Regards, M.
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Bagher
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Abiat
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6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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