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You Have Seen An Advertisement In A Magazine For Someone To Live With A Family For Six Months To Look After Their Child

Dear Sir/madam I am writing with regards to an advertisement in a magazine for a six month child minder position. I would like you to consider me for this position. I recently relocated to Australia as an English teacher, and this opportunity would be a perfect fit in my current situation. This job would not only provide me with some additional funds, but also help me familiarize with Australian culture and way of life. This position will most surely be a perfect fit for me because of my profession. As I am a 4th grade teacher, I have experience with dealing with children of ages from on year and 1o years. Beside being a teacher I am also a father to 8 year old and have had parental experience dealing with six year old. Since, I am new to Australia, I was hoping to do some site seeing in my free time, so that I get oriented to the area. I am keen to visit the famous areas in Australia as well, so most of my leisure times I will be probably visiting these sites Thank you for you time reading my letter, and feel free to let me know if you need any more information or recommendations. I hope you will consider me for this position Yours sincerely Farai

Dear Sir/madam

I am writing with regards to an advertisement in a magazine for a six month child minder position. I would like you to consider me for this

position.

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let
 me know if you need any more information or recommendations.

I hope you will consider me for this position

Yours sincerely


Farai