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Dear Sir or Madam, I am Anna Lui from the Philippines, writing in response to an advertisement that I saw a couple of days ago in a magazine.

Dear Sir or Madam, I am Anna Lui from the Philippines, writing in response to an advertisement that I saw a couple of days ago in a magazine. I have prior experience of working in a school and I would like to have a part-time job once I move to Australia. Your house is located within 10 minutes walking distance from the University of Newcastle where I will start my bachelor degree from next July. And I am very keen to look after your child with my best care and attention. I have worked as a part-time teacher in an elementary school a couple of years ago. Also, being the eldest among the siblings, I also have looked after my brother and two sisters. I love to spend time with little children who are an absolute delight to be around. Besides, my academic results are excellent and being fluent in English would help me communicate with your children effectively. I consider myself a deserving candidate for the job to look after your six-year-old child. After I move to Australia next July, I guess I will be busy with my university studies and spend time with your child for at least six months. Also, as a passionate blogger, I might travel to a few places and write about them in my blog. I am hoping that you would employ me to look after your child for at least six months. Yours faithfully, Anna Lui
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am Anna Lui from the Philippines, writing in response to an advertisement that I
saw
a couple of days ago in a magazine. I have prior experience of working in a school and I would like to have a part-time job once I
move
to Australia. Your
house
is located
within 10 minutes walking distance from the University of Newcastle where I will
start
my bachelor degree from
next
July. And I am
very
keen to look after your child with my best care and attention.

I have worked as a part-time teacher in an elementary school a couple of years ago.
Also
, being the eldest among the siblings, I
also
have looked after my brother and two sisters. I
love
to spend time with
little
children who are an absolute delight to be around.
Besides
, my academic results are excellent and being fluent in English would
help
me communicate with your children
effectively
. I consider myself a deserving candidate for the job to look after your six-year-
old
child.

After I
move
to Australia
next
July, I guess I will be busy with my university studies and spend time with your child for at least six months.
Also
, as a passionate blogger, I might travel to a few places and write about them in my blog.

I am hoping that you would employ me to look after your child for at least six months.

Yours
faithfully
,

Anna Lui
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IELTS letter Dear Sir or Madam, I am Anna Lui from the Philippines, writing in response to an advertisement that I saw a couple of days ago in a magazine.

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
242 words
7.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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