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You Have Seen An Advertisement In A Magazine For Someone To Live With A Family For Six Months To Look After Their Child

I am writing in response to your advertisement in Perth Today magazine of June 2019 edition. I am a resident of New-Zealand. My children are studying in Canada and my husband has recently been transferred in the middle east for a project of 6 months. Since I am alone at home and experienced in taking care of young children, I would like to apply for a childcare job. I have worked as a deputy's head in childcare from last 12 years. Working for such a long duration has given me enough experience to manage child, and how to keep them engaged in absent of their parents and follow the prescribed schedule given by guardians. Moreover, I am sincere, tidy, patient and hard-working. Therefore, my experience and sincerity towards the childcare will help me to perform this duty in a better way. One of my cousin sisters has recently been shifted to the western part of Perth. So, when I am free, I can go to visit her and spend some time at her place. This will help me to spend my free time without being a burden on you. If you have any questions, you can mail me at abc@gmail. com or call at 44553366 Hoping for a positive reply. Your's faithfully Rashi Patel.

I am writing in response to your advertisement in Perth This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :this day and agenowadays
Today
 magazine of June 2019 edition.

I am a resident of New-Zealand. My children are studying in Canada and my husband has recently been transferred
 in the middle east for a project of 6 months. Since I am alone at home and experienced in taking care of young children, I would like to apply for a childcare job.

I have worked as a deputy's head in childcare from last 12 years. Working for such a long duration has This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 me This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
enough
 experience to manage child, and how to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retain
keep
 them engaged in absent of their parents and follow the prescribed schedule This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 by guardians. Moreover
, I am sincere, tidy, patient and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
-working. Therefore
, my experience and sincerity towards the childcare will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 me to perform this duty in a better way.

One of my cousin sisters has recently been shifted
 to the western part of Perth. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
, when I am free, I can go to visit her and spend This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 time at her place. This will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 me to spend my free time without being a burden on you.

If you have any questions, you can mail me at abc@gmail. com or call at 44553366

Hoping for a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:beneficial
positive
 reply.

Your's faithfully


Rashi Patel. 