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Lost Item from the hotel during the last stay

Lost Item from the hotel during the last stay ldap9
Dear Alex, I'm Zion, Im writing this letter to you inform that i have left my Bag at your Hotel on 23rd Saturday. i have checked-in 21st Monday August and my room number was 406. the lost bag is brown color and it has gold batch on the top. The reason this bag is urgent to me, it contains most valuble items belong to my studies and work life. The items in the bag were laptop, iPad and watch Also there have valuble letters which belong to my office. You can find my ownership details in backside of the bag with red tag. i really trust this bag with you now and please be kind enough to contact me urgently to deliver this bag soon. Also i would like to thank you and team during my stay, they have gave really hospitality service and they have arranged me a wonderful suite with ocean view. i really enjoyed my time at your hotel during the period. Here are my contact details. Name: Mike Terry Email Address: mike@gmail. com Mobile Number: +95487562334455 Reservation Number: 58545LK Thank you.
Dear Alex,

I'm Zion,
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writing this letter to you inform that
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i
have
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my
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Bag
at your Hotel on 23rd Saturday.
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i
have
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checked
-in 21st Monday August and my room

number was 406.
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the
lost
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bag
is brown color and it has gold batch on the top. The reason this bag

is urgent to me, it contains most
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valuble
items belong to my studies and work life. The items in the
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bag
were laptop, iPad and
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watch


Also
there have
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valuble
letters which belong to my office. You can find my ownership
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details
in backside of the
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bag
with red tag.

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i
really
trust this
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bag
with you
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now
and
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please
be kind
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enough
to contact me
urgently
to deliver this
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bag
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soon
.
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Also
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i
would like to thank you and team during my stay, they

have
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gave
really
hospitality
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service and
they have arranged me a wonderful suite with ocean view.
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i
really
enjoyed my time at your hotel during the period. Here are

my contact
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details
.

Name: Mike Terry

Email Address:
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com


Mobile Number: +95487562334455

Reservation Number: 58545LK

Thank you.
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IELTS letter Lost Item from the hotel during the last stay

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
185 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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