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A letter for manager of the confrence center

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Dear madam, This letter is written to enquire about the availability of your conference center from September, 8 to 12, 2021, from 9 am to 2 pm for conducting a special training workshop for our staff. This workshop is meant a part of the skill development of our fresher teachers, so we expect almost 200 members in the conference hall and 100 rooms in your hotel. The training will be an open platform for group discussion, interaction, and evaluation, therefore, we require some equipment. We necessitate five microphones with a podium, a projector, the best audio speakers, and two boards to cope up with visual training. Furthermore, it would be nice if you can arrange snacks for the group during the break and after the session. Additionally, let me know how many seats are there in the hall so that we can arrange the list accordingly. moreover, we would also like to enquire about the other facilities offered by the Center as the number of accessible rooms, the detail of the parking space as well and the other requirements that mentioned above. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Zahra Dahaghin
Dear madam,

This letter
is written
to
enquire
about the availability of your conference center from September, 8 to 12, 2021, from 9 am to 2 pm for conducting a special training workshop for our staff.

This workshop
is meant
a part of the
skill
development of our fresher teachers,
so
we
expect
almost 200 members in the conference hall and 100 rooms in your hotel.

The training will be an open platform for group discussion, interaction, and evaluation,
therefore
, we require
some
equipment. We necessitate five microphones with a podium, a projector, the best audio speakers, and two boards to cope up with visual training.
Furthermore
, it would be nice if you can arrange snacks for the group during the break and after the session.

Additionally
,
let
me know how
many
seats are there in the hall
so
that we can arrange the list
accordingly
.
moreover
, we would
also
like to
enquire
about the other facilities offered by the Center as the number of accessible rooms, the detail of the parking space
as well
and the other requirements that mentioned above.

I am looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours
faithfully
,

Zahra
Dahaghin
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IELTS letter A letter for manager of the confrence center

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
193 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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