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Local tv is organising burial of time capsule. Suggest 3 artefacts

Local tv is organising burial of time capsule. Suggest 3 artefacts qL8X5

Dear sir/ madam, I am writing with respect to the advertisement in the newspaper regarding burial of time capsule. I would like to make some suggestions for the same. Firstly I would like to suggest inclusion of mobiles in time capsule. The future generations would not be able to know how the mobiles worked and what improvements were made in decades. Newspapers are becoming less day by day and people are being dependent on online news. There might come an era where people would not know what newspapers are and how they looked like. Hence, second artefact that would suggest is the newspaper. And the third artefact that I would like to be included are the medicinal formula books where the future generations would be aware of what medicines were used and how science has changed with time and what progress we have made. All three artefacts are of utmost important in today’s world but there would be a time when these things are no more used. Hope you will consider my suggestions. Regards,

Dear sir/ madam,

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time
 capsule. I would like to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
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some
 suggestions for the same.

Firstly
 I would like to suggest inclusion of mobiles in You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
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 capsule. The future generations would not be able to know how the mobiles worked and what improvements were made
 in decades.

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people
 are being dependent on online news. There might This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 an era where This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 would not know what newspapers are and how they looked like. Hence
, second Possible spelling mistake. 'artefact' is British English.artifact
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 that would suggest is the newspaper.

And the third Possible spelling mistake. 'artefact' is British English.artifact
artefact
 that I would like to be included
 are the medicinal formula books where the future generations would be aware of what medicines were This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 and how science has This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
 with You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
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 and what progress we have made. All three Possible spelling mistake. 'artefacts' is British English.artifacts
artefacts
 are of utmost This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
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today
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but
 there would be a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
time
 when these things are no more This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
.

Hope you will consider my suggestions.

Regards, 