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live with a family and take careof kid

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing in reference to your advert in the magazine, regarding a person who can home-stay and take care of the kid for a short period. I am confident that I will be able to meet your requirements as I am very good at taking care of the house and the kids. I love cooking and if you like Indian curries, I can make vegetarian dishes. It will be a extremely good opportunity for me. Being the eldest in the family I had been assigned responsibility of my younger brother and sister, from a very young age, while my parents were at work. I find myself extremely comfortable with the children and know to feed and engage them in various learning/play activities. My neighbours would be ready to vouch for my abilities as on several occasions they have left their kids with me. I arrived earlier in Australia to get acquainted with the culture and lifestyle before I plan to apply for post-graduate courses. Meanwhile, I will be researching course options and preparing for the admission formalities in the top tier universities. I am looking for options that will allow me to live, work and earn to manage expenses until I get admitted. In anticipation of a reply from you. Yours faithfully Gaurav
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing in reference to your advert in the magazine, regarding a person who can home-stay and take care of the kid for a short period. I am confident that I will be able to
meet
your requirements as I am
very
good
at taking care of the
house
and the kids.
I
love
cooking and if you like Indian curries, I can
make
vegetarian dishes. It will be
a
extremely
good
opportunity for me.

Being the eldest in the family I had
been assigned
responsibility of my younger brother and sister, from a
very
young age, while my parents were at work. I find myself
extremely
comfortable with the children and know to feed and engage them in various learning/play activities. My
neighbours
would be ready to vouch for my abilities as on several occasions they have
left
their kids with me.

I arrived earlier in Australia to
get
acquainted with the culture and lifestyle
before
I plan to apply for post-graduate courses. Meanwhile, I will be researching course options and preparing for the admission formalities in the top tier universities. I am looking for options that will
allow
me to
live
, work and earn to manage expenses until I
get
admitted.

In anticipation of a reply from you.

Yours
faithfully


Gaurav
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IELTS letter live with a family and take careof kid

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
217 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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