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Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company

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Dear Sir, Greetings of the day! I am writing this letter with regard to the valuable item that I lost during my last trip to Paris. I lost my antique diamond ring while travelling from Paris to France via train, When I started my journey on 21. 09. 2021 from Paris at 10: 30 at that time my ornament was present in the inner pocket of my hand bag. On the contrary it was missing, when I reached at France station, as the bag was with me throughout the entire journey. It cost me around 50, 000 Euro which I recently bought from Alex Ornaments, France. I am entitled to make a claim for the value above mentioned item and request you to send me details on what I need to do in order to proceed. I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Dear Sir, Greetings of the day! I am writing this letter with regard to the valuable item that I lost during my last trip to Paris. I lost my antique diamond ring while travelling from Paris to France via train, When I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
started
my journey on 21. 09. 2021 from Paris at 10: 30 at that time my ornament was present in the inner pocket of my hand bag.
On the contrary
it was missing, when I reached at France station, as the bag was with me throughout the entire journey. It cost me around 50, 000 Euro which I recently
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
bought
from Alex Ornaments, France. I
am entitled
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
a claim for the value above mentioned item and request you to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
send
me
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
details
on what I need to do in order to proceed. I am looking forward to hearing from you.
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IELTS letter Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
144 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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