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Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company

Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company K0aVw

Dear Sir, Greetings of the day! I am writing this letter with regard to the valuable item that I lost during my last trip to Paris. I lost my antique diamond ring while travelling from Paris to France via train, When I started my journey on 21. 09. 2021 from Paris at 10: 30 at that time my ornament was present in the inner pocket of my hand bag. On the contrary it was missing, when I reached at France station, as the bag was with me throughout the entire journey. It cost me around 50, 000 Euro which I recently bought from Alex Ornaments, France. I am entitled to make a claim for the value above mentioned item and request you to send me details on what I need to do in order to proceed. I am looking forward to hearing from you.

Dear Sir, Greetings of the day! I am writing this letter with regard to the valuable item that I lost during my last trip to Paris. I lost my antique diamond ring while travelling from Paris to France via train, When I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 my journey on 21. 09. 2021 from Paris at 10: 30 at that time my ornament was present in the inner pocket of my hand bag. On the contrary
 it was missing, when I reached at France station, as the bag was with me throughout the entire journey. It cost me around 50, 000 Euro which I recently This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchased
bought
 from Alex Ornaments, France. I am entitled
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 a claim for the value above mentioned item and request you to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmit
send
 me This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :particulars
details
 on what I need to do in order to proceed. I am looking forward to hearing from you. 

IELTS letter Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company

Letter

American English

1 paragraphs

144 words

This writing has been penalized,
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1

4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 7.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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