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Letter to Transport Company for the delayed service in your area

Letter to Transport Company for the delayed service in your area PEW1g
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to draw your attention to the issues related to local bus service in Manchester. I take 7. 30 am bus from Manchester to Liverpool to reach my office. This week the bus arrived 10 minutes late each day and I was not able to find a seat for myself due to overcrowding. It is not only with me, but other passengers are also facing similar problems with overcrowding and delays in reaching to their respective destinations due to late service. This is leading to the increase in frustration and inconvenience as people have to stand during their entire journey which is really tiresome. I would like to suggest that in order to address these concerns, please increase the number of buses on this route during the peak hours. In addition to this, ensure that the buses are arriving on time. I hope you will address these concerns and look into this matter on priority. Yours faithfully Sam Williams
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter to draw your attention to the issues related to local bus service in Manchester.

I take 7. 30 am bus from Manchester to Liverpool to reach my office. This week the bus arrived 10 minutes late each
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day and
I was not able to find a seat for myself due to overcrowding.

It is not
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other passengers are
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facing similar problems with overcrowding and delays in reaching to their respective destinations due to late service. This is leading to the increase in frustration and inconvenience as
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people
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stand during their entire journey which is
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tiresome.

I would like to suggest that in order to address these concerns,
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please
increase the number of buses on this route during the peak hours.
In addition
to this, ensure that the buses are arriving on time.

I hope you will address these concerns and look into this matter on priority.

Yours
faithfully


Sam Williams
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IELTS letter Letter to Transport Company for the delayed service in your area

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
166 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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