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letter to a friend forget something at his home 1. thank him 2. what did u forget 3. how to return

letter to a friend forget something at his home 1. thank him 2. what did u forget 3. how to return MylOp
Dear Jessy, I hope this letter finds you in good health and spirits. I think you are enjoying spring, would like to take a chance to thank you for a great weekend. I am grateful to you for being such a good host. My wife and I are waiting for looking forward for your visit with your family at my house. Once I reached my home, realized that my watch was missing and lost. Guessing, must have let in your bathroom. Prior to, leaving your house, took a shower presumably that's the time I left it. It is an automatic diver analogue with a circular dial, the dial and the strap are in white color, while, the buckle, lug and bezel are brown. Thus, I am sure you will recognize it as soon as you see it. I hope this is not causing any trouble to you. As the watch is a gift received from my wife, really don't want to lose it, moreover, it would be extremely disappointing if I misplaced. Consequently, it is most valuable thing and once, you find it please send it via courier services to my address. I will bear the courier cost. I hope to see you soon. Warm wishes,
Dear Jessy,

I hope this letter finds you in
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
health and spirits. I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
you are enjoying spring, would like to take a chance to thank you for a great weekend.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
am grateful to you for being such a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
host. My wife and I are waiting for looking forward for your visit with your family at my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
.

Once I reached my home, realized that my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
watch
was missing and lost. Guessing,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
have
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
let
in your bathroom. Prior to, leaving your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
, took a shower presumably that's the time I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
left
it. It is an automatic diver analogue with a circular dial, the dial and the strap are in white color, while, the buckle, lug and bezel are brown.
Thus
, I am sure you will recognize it as
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
as you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
it.

I hope this is not causing any trouble to you. As the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
watch
is a gift received from my wife,
really
don't want to lose it,
moreover
, it would be
extremely
disappointing if I misplaced.
Consequently
, it is
Did you mean "the most"?
most
valuable thing and once, you find it
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
send
it via courier services to my address. I will bear the courier cost.

I hope to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
.

Warm wishes,
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IELTS letter letter to a friend forget something at his home 1. thank him 2. what did u forget 3. how to return

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
206 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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