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Each year, tens of thousand of Americans die from heart attacks. Most physicians believe that high blood pressure and/or high cholesterol lead heart attacks. Blood pressure and cholesterol can lower through proper diet and exercise. Physicians at the Heart Research Center are conducting a research study to determine the best combination between diet and exercise to benefit individual. The Heart Research Center is looking for volunteers to participate in this research project. Volunteers will get free weekly checkups and an initial consultation with medical professionals to device a diet and exercise plan that minimizes the risk of a heart attack. Individuals wishing to volunteer should call Michael at 555-4286 before March 25. Michael will answer your questions on this research project.

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