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You are planning a 2 day work training outside your city . Write to manager of the hotel. Introduce yourself and your company. Ask availability of rooms and every arrangement that will be needed.

You are planning a 2 day work training outside your city. Write to manager of the hotel. Introduce yourself and your company. Ask availability of rooms and every arrangement that will be needed. jRVBy
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to enquire about the facilities and services available in your hotel for training purposes of our company staff. We ABC Elastomers LTD, manufacturer of marine products and our factory situated near the outskirts of the Ahmedabad city. In today’s fast paced era, to stay updated with new technology and techniques is become essential for everyone. Generally, we arrange training sessions in clubs, however, as an event in charge person I found your property is suitable for us and close to residential area. Furthermore, we would like to know room availability for single bed, double occupancy from 25th to 27th March for our planning. Kindly request you to forward us best rates and included service and chargeable facilities, too. In addition, also mention meeting hall capacity with projector and other equipment charges and their condition, thus, we can plan accordingly. If is there any special activities for visitors then please inform us, because this is not only limited formal training but also includes recreational activities for our employees. Looking forward to receive your email with positive reply. Your earliest response highly appreciated.
Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to
enquire
about the facilities and services available in your hotel for training purposes of our
company
staff.

We ABC Elastomers LTD, manufacturer of marine products and our factory situated near the outskirts of the Ahmedabad city. In
today
’s
fast
paced era, to stay updated with new technology and techniques
is become
essential for everyone.
Generally
, we arrange training sessions in clubs,
however
, as an
event
in charge person I found your property is suitable for us and close to residential area.

Furthermore
, we would like to know room availability for single bed, double occupancy from 25th to 27th March for our planning. Kindly request you to forward us best rates and included service and chargeable facilities, too.
In addition
,
also
mention meeting hall capacity with projector and other equipment charges and their condition,
thus
, we can plan
accordingly
. If is there any special activities for visitors then
please
inform us,
because
this is not
only
limited formal training
but
also
includes recreational activities for our employees.

Looking forward
to receive
your email with
positive
reply. Your earliest response
highly
appreciated.

IELTS letter You are planning a 2 day work training outside your city. Write to manager of the hotel. Introduce yourself and your company. Ask availability of rooms and every arrangement that will be needed.

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  American English
5 paragraphs
188 words
6.0
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