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Apology letter to my friend

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I'm so sorry I couldn't go to your birthday. I hear you had a great birthday. My friends said that the food there was overflowing and the dance, laughter was so much fun. I'm very sorry. I should have told you I couldn’t go to the birthday party But it wasn’t possible. The value of truth has been met by precious people. My boss said this meeting should be a secret, no one knows about it. I couldn’t connect with you for that. So to top it all off, I want to invite you and your family to dinner to fulfill my guilt. It’s all at my expense, I just invite you to come to the meeting. I hope you accept my apology.
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sorry I couldn't go to your birthday. I hear you had a great birthday. My friends said that the food there was overflowing and the dance, laughter was
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much fun.

I'm
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sorry. I should have
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you I couldn’t go to the birthday party
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it wasn’t possible. The value of truth has
been met
by precious
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people
. My boss said this meeting should be a secret, no one knows about it. I couldn’t connect with you for that.

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So
to top it all off, I want to invite you and your family to dinner to fulfill my guilt. It’s all at my expense, I
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invite you to
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come
to the meeting. I hope you accept my apology.

IELTS letter Apology letter to my friend

Letter
  American English
3 paragraphs
123 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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