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For a busy restaurant located in the main tourist area of this region. We have a number of vacancies available, including: Junior Chef Waiter/Waitress

For a busy restaurant located in the main tourist area of this region. We have a number of vacancies available, including: Junior Chef Waiter/Waitress DVqk6
Dear Sir or Madam I am writing with reference to your advertisement for the position of a Restaurant Manager, which was placed in The Thanh Nien newspaper (http: //alojob. vn) on 10 December. My reason for being interested in this vacancy is that according to what is said by the executives of the companies I worked for (please find enclosed their letters of reference), I am particularly efficient being involved in projects requiring a great deal of physical and mental energy and also creativity. Your restaurant would benefit from these personal qualities of mine brought into play. I am sure that I would be successful in this post as I have now gained the - managerial experience having had work as a Senior Manager for the "Little Chef Restaurant" for 10 years. At present I work for the restaurant mentioned above, where my responsibilities comprise dealing with suppliers and corporate clients, recruiting employees and checking financial statements of affiliated companies. My academic background (a Masters Degree in Tourism & Hospitality) would also prove valuable to you. Please could you send me an application form and any other relevant details including those of payment, working hours, health scheme and social facilities? I am able to attend an interview on any day from 11 a. m. Should you need any further information, do not hesitate to contact me on (Số điện thoại nếu có) from 9 a. m. to 5 p. m. or (Chị cho bất kỳ địa chỉ nào vào đây-ví dụ thôi)@gmail. com. Yours faithfully,
Dear Sir or Madam

I am writing with reference to your advertisement for the position of a
Restaurant
Manager, which
was placed
in The Thanh
Nien
newspaper (
http
: //
alojob
.
vn
) on 10 December.

My reason for
being interested
in this vacancy is that according to what
is said
by the executives of the
companies
I worked for (
please
find enclosed their letters of reference), I am
particularly
efficient
being involved
in projects requiring a great deal of physical and mental energy and
also
creativity. Your
restaurant
would benefit from these personal qualities of mine brought into play.

I am sure that I would be successful in this post as I have
now
gained the
-
managerial experience having had work as a Senior Manager for the
"
Little
Chef Restaurant
"
for 10 years. At
present I
work for the
restaurant
mentioned above, where my responsibilities comprise dealing with suppliers and corporate clients, recruiting employees and checking financial statements of affiliated
companies
.

My academic background (a
Masters
Degree in Tourism & Hospitality) would
also
prove valuable to you.

Please
could you
send
me an application form and any other relevant
details
including those of payment, working hours, health scheme and social facilities?

I am able to attend an interview on any day from 11 a. m. Should you need any
further
information, do not hesitate to contact me on (
Số
điện
thoại
nếu
) from 9 a. m. to 5 p. m. or (
Chị
cho
bất
kỳ
địa
chỉ
nào
vào
đây-ví
dụ
thôi
)
@gmail
.
com
.

Yours
faithfully
,
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IELTS letter For a busy restaurant located in the main tourist area of this region. We have a number of vacancies available, including: Junior Chef Waiter/Waitress

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
255 words
6.0
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