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To enter for work application

To enter for work application Gr3Bo

Dear Sir. I am very interesting in your advertisement in today's edition of local newspaper" The daily Telegraph" and I should like to apply to be a member of your management " Sibrskoy". I am thirty_ four years old and obtained a degree in Bachelour Tashkent State Medical Unversity in 2006. I feel I have many of the important qualifications needed for this job I am proactive and able to handle multiple tasks simultaneously. I am currently looking for a position that will allow me to develop my skills and experience. In addition to this, I participate in Computer course. I enjoy several indoors activies such as playing tennis and playing chess. I am sociable and I can get on well with the new people easily. If you would like me to attend an interview. I would be able to come at any time convenient to you, as I do want to be a member of your company. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Your faithfully. Gavkhar Suyunovna.

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Unversity
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many
 of the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
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 qualifications needed for this job I am proactive and able to handle multiple tasks simultaneously
. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
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 looking for a position that will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
allow
 me to develop my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiencies
skills
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 to this, I participate in Computer course. I enjoy several indoors Possible spelling mistake found.activesact ivies
activies
 such as playing tennis and playing chess. I am sociable and I can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 on well with the new This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
easily
. “If” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
If
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would like
 me to attend an interview. I would be able to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 at any time convenient to you, as I do want to be a member of your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
. I look forward to hearing from you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
. Your faithfully
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Gavkhar
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Suyunovna
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