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Apology letter for mistake

Apology letter for mistake N83km
Dear my friend Dilshod: I am writing to apologise for not to attend to your birthday party celeberated on 24th of June. I hope you and your family are superb well. I received your invitation card the day before yesterday. At first, many thanks for inviting me to your birthday celeberation. On the contrary I am extremely sorry to that I can not attend it although I had promised youthat I would attend it. Because on that day my father had an essential meeting and my mother also had to go to my grandmother till late in the evening. Consequently I had to stay at home alone. In addition, I had a lot of work to do on my own. Therefore, I had not gone to your birthday party. I am sure you must have had a nice time with your friends and relatives. Please do not be angry, I hope you will understand my problem. Once again I sincerely apologise for not attending to your party. I will surely meet with you when I will return. With lots of love I am closing this letter. Yours faithfully John Brown.
Dear my friend
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Dilshod
:

I am writing to
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apologise
for not to attend to your birthday party
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celeberated
on 24th of June.

I hope you and your family are superb well.
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I
received your invitation card the day
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before
yesterday. At
first
,
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many
thanks for inviting me to your birthday
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celeberation
.
On the contrary
I am
extremely
sorry to that I can not attend it although I had promised
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youthat
I would attend it.
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Because
on that day my father had an essential meeting and my mother
also
had to go to my grandmother till late in the evening.
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Consequently
I had to stay at home alone.
In addition
, I had
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a lot of
work to do on my
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own
.
Therefore
, I had not gone to your birthday party.

I am sure you
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must
have had a nice time with your friends and relatives.
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Please
do not be angry, I hope you will understand my problem. Once again I
sincerely
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apologise
for not attending to your party. I will
surely
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
with you when I will return. With lots of
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love
I am closing this letter.

Yours
faithfully


John Brown.

IELTS letter Apology letter for mistake

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
190 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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