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You have seen a job advertisement in the newspaper. you want to apply for a job, write a letter

You have seen a job advertisement in the newspaper. you want to apply for a job, write a letter 3MWEX

Dear Sir or Madam. I am writing to apply for a job of a news reporter at your TV program which I saw advertised in newspaper. I am twenty years old and obtained a degree at young journalist school in Moscow art school in 2019. I feel I have many of the important qualifications needed for this job. I am presently working as speaker in the department at "all word marketing" where I have been for two years. In addition to this, I participate in IELTS courses. I am proactive and able to handle multiple tasks simultaneously. I am currently looking for a position that will allow me to develop my skills and experience. I enjoy several outdoor activities such as planting trees and swimming. I am sociable and l can get on well with new people easily. I am an enthusiastic and energetic employee and I feel that I am will qualified for this job. I would be grateful if you could consider me for this position.

Dear Sir or Madam.

I am writing to apply for a job of a news reporter at your TV program which I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
saw
 advertised in newspaper.

I am twenty years This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
 and obtained a degree at young journalist school in Moscow art school in 2019. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 feel I have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 of the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 qualifications needed for this job. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 am presently
 working as speaker in the department at Use a smart opening quote here: "“".“
"
all word marketingUse a smart closing quote here: "”".”
"
 where I have been for two years. In addition
 to this, I participate in IELTS courses.

I am proactive and able to handle multiple tasks simultaneously
. I am currently
 looking for a position that will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
allow
 me to develop my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiencies
skills
 and experience.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 enjoy several outdoor activities such as planting trees and swimming. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 am sociable and l can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 on well with new This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
easily
.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 am an enthusiastic and energetic employee and I feel that I am will qualified for this job. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 would be grateful if you could consider me for this position. 

IELTS letter You have seen a job advertisement in the newspaper. you want to apply for a job, write a letter

Letter

American English

6 paragraphs

168 words

6.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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