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Letter to the company complaining about the additional money they charged for an item

Letter to the company complaining about the additional money they charged for an item lLA81
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to complain about a mobile phone, which I purchased from your online store on 10 November. I placed the order from your website to buy a Nokia phone which has a model id as Poco F1 124. When I checked the item before placing the order, there was a 20% discount mentioned on the original price. It was for $200, however, after discount it was for $160. But when I placed the order by using my credit card it deducted the original price instead of sale price. I clearly remember that the reduced amount for the phone was flashing on the website and I read the same in the Times Now newspaper also. As I have paid additional amount, I request you to look into this matter urgently and return $40 back to my bank account or add it to my card. I would look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Sam
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter to complain about a mobile phone, which I
purchased
from your online store on 10 November.

I placed the order from your website to
buy
a Nokia phone which has a model id as
Poco
F1 124. When I
checked
the item
before
placing the order, there was a 20% discount mentioned on the original price. It was for $200,
however
, after discount it was for $160.

But
when I placed the order by using my credit card it deducted the original price
instead
of sale price. I
clearly
remember that the
reduced
amount for the phone was flashing on the website and I read the same in the Times
Now
newspaper
also
.

As I have paid additional amount, I request you to look into this matter
urgently
and return $40 back to my bank account or
add
it to my card.

I would look forward to hearing from you.

Yours
faithfully
,

Sam
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IELTS letter Letter to the company complaining about the additional money they charged for an item

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
161 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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