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Write a letter to your council to complain about the uneven pavement on your street You should say: Why you are writing Who you are What you need from them Why they should help you

Write a letter to your council to complain about the uneven pavement on your street You should say: Why you are writing Who you are What you need from them Why they should help you BaGl5
Dear Sir/Madam, I am Vinoth Sivaji writing this letter regarding poor condition of road on street. I would like to take this problem to your notice and I believe this council can enable to make new road for housing board people I am living in Vellore Housing Board past five years, which I have noticed there was insufficient road to travel with bike and car. Yesterday there was one incident with heavy rain, the old man travelled with bike around 8. 30pm and he did not noticed on street was groove and he was fallen in groove and he had injure. After this incident the public feel to come outside from the home when rain comes. This kind of situation the public fear to live in housing board colony, The public grievance important for your council and take this letter to the higher officer and I request kindly come and visit our area to check street roads and to sort this problem. Yours faithfully, VinothSivaji.
Dear Sir/Madam,

I am
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Vinoth
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Sivaji
writing this letter regarding poor condition of
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road
on street. I would like to take this problem to your notice and I believe this council can enable to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
new
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
road
for housing board
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
people


Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
am living in
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Vellore
Housing Board past five years, which I have noticed there was insufficient
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
road
to travel with bike and car. Yesterday there was one incident with heavy rain, the
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
old
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
man
travelled with bike around 8. 30pm and he did not
After the auxiliary verb 'do', use the base form of a verb. Did you mean "notice"?
noticed
on street was
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
groove and
he
was fallen
in
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
groove and
he had injure. After this incident the public feel to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
outside from the home when rain
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
comes
. This kind of situation the public fear to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
in housing board colony,

The public grievance
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
for your council and take this letter to the higher officer and I request kindly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
and visit our area to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
check
street
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
roads
and to sort this problem.

Yours
faithfully
,

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VinothSivaji
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your council to complain about the uneven pavement on your street You should say: Why you are writing Who you are What you need from them Why they should help you

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6 paragraphs
165 words
5.5
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