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write an informal letter to your parent about your holiday

write an informal letter to your parent about your holiday 0ML53

Dear Mum and Dad, How’s it going? I hope you are doing well. I’m writing to let you know about my holiday in Paris. It’s amazing! I can’t wait to share everything with you. Visiting Paris and seeing the city of light and rich culture is a terrific experience so far. After going through airport necessities, my friend and I caught a cab to enter the heart of the French lifestyle and started on our excursion. The first place we visited was the Louvre Museum. I had a chance to see the beautiful Mona Lisa! There were also many other grandeur attractions that we’ve put our steps on. The artwork and architecture have really had an impact on me. On top of that, the food here is appetizing. I have never tasted such delicate and luxury dishes before. I’ll tell you more about the details when I come back home. Although my trip to Paris has got a lot of fun, I guess I get a little homesick because of not being with you guys right now. But don’t worry, I’ll see you soon. Stay safe! Love, Uyen

Dear Mum and Dad,

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let
 you know about my holiday in Paris. It’s amazing! I can’t wait to share everything with you.

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started
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many
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details
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little
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see
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. Stay safe!

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Love
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