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Letter to my mother outlining how she loved me and how I miss her warm embrace

Letter to my mother outlining how she loved me and how I miss her warm embrace mXe1n

Dear Mum, Its has been so long since we spent time together. I miss your beautiful face, your welcoming smile, our special times together. I remember growing up in your warm embrace and feeling the comforts and security that only one would get when they are loved. I was on a bus the other day and saw a young mother nurturing and playing with her new-born child. I wondered if that's how you looked at me. I always felt a warm blissful feeling when I was by your side. I remember the days you would walk me to school, you always made sure I had my bags packed with my school lunch. I still recall the time I cried because John Smith beat me up! . . . You certainly raised a ruckus that day! . . Miss your eggplant dish with the minced beef and potatoes. . . please make me some when I get home next week. Love you so much! Steven

Dear Mum, Its has been This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 long since we spent time together. I miss your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :gorgeousstunning
beautiful
 face, your welcoming smile, our special times together. I remember growing up in your warm embrace and feeling the comforts and security that This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 one would This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 when they are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admiredadored
loved
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Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 was on a bus the other day and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
saw
 a young mother nurturing and playing with her new-born child. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 wondered if that's how you looked at me. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 always felt a warm blissful feeling when I was by your side.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 remember the days you would walk me to school, you always made sure I had my bags packed with my school lunch. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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still
 recall the time I cried This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 John Smith beat me up! Don't put a space before the full stop.
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 You certainly
 raised a ruckus that day! Don't put a space before the full stop.
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Miss your eggplant dish with the minced beef and potatoes. Don't put a space before the full stop.
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Don't put a space before the full stop.
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This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterPlease
please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 me This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 when I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 home next
 week.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
Love
 you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 much! Steven