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Dear Sir, I hope you having good health. I’m Seema student of design. I read your advertisement in the local newspaper last night. I’m interested in this voluntary work at museum. I like volunteer work which gives me exquisite feelings of excitement to assist people. I’m motivated student having a good communication skill. I like to be an organized which really helps me to be prepared for different actions. I can enjoy this job because I’m fond of historical stories. I Working in museum foster my knowledge about history. already worked at museum in my spare time. From that I gained experiences now I’m fully aware museum’s job and their duties very well. If I got a chance to be selected for this work I will be honored. Furthermore, I will be able to learn more about this museum and their history. My free slot for this job will be 2: 00pm to 4: 00pm from Monday to Friday but I will be full available on weekends.

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’m interested in this voluntary work at museum.

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