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you have bought a product for friend birthday but he has already with it, write a letter to company to return it

you have bought a product for friend birthday but he has already with it, write a letter to company to return it NWDyj
Dear Sir, I am writing to you for a refund which recently I had purchased from your website. please allow me to elaborate it why I would like this course of action to be realized. I had purchased A Digital Camera product model is E525 with 50 Megapixel for my friend on his birthday on dated 20 Sep 1992 from your company. The camera has Red color along with 20 Megapixels with an external cover for safety. Its cost was Rs 3500/-. unfortunately, He has the same Camera in his house and has no requirement for the same product in the house hence we would like to return it back to you. I Know you will empathize with our feeling and confirm the address where we can dispatch it and also share company courier services detail. We are highly expected that you will credit the Bank account from whom we had paid. I Look forward to hearing from you. Best Regards Hardeep Singh
Dear Sir, I am writing to you for a refund which recently I had
purchased
from your website.
please
allow
me to elaborate it why I would like this course of action to
be realized
.

I had
purchased
A Digital Camera product model is E525 with 50
Megapixel
for my friend on his birthday on dated 20 Sep 1992 from your
company
. The camera has Red color along with 20 Megapixels with an external cover for safety. Its cost was Rs 3500/-.
unfortunately
, He has the same Camera in his
house
and has no requirement for the same product in the
house
hence
we would like to return it back to you.

I Know you will empathize with our feeling and confirm the address where we can dispatch it and
also
share
company
courier services detail. We are
highly
expected
that you will credit the Bank account from whom we had paid.

I Look forward to hearing from you.

Best Regards

Hardeep
Singh
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IELTS letter you have bought a product for friend birthday but he has already with it, write a letter to company to return it

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
162 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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