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write letter to your friend and let him know about the English club which you will join next month

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Dear my friend, I was so excited when I receive your email because a long time ago we did not have time to chat together. I am immediately writing this letter to inform you that on the first Monday next month, I am studying an English club near my house and hope you can join with me. To begin with, English is an important more and more and I usually can't speak fluence when I am trying to speak English with someone else. Consequently, I decide to join an English club. I wish I can improve my English speaking skill after I complete this course. Secondly, the second reason which makes me confirm to register this course is we will have a teacher come from Venezuela and he has more experience to teach people don’t use English as a first language. Moreover, we have an assistant who will explain anything whatever students want to know. And don’t worry about documents or books, they have already enough for all members in classes. Last but not least, this course has two timetables for each class: this one is available at 9. 00 in the morning and another will start at 7. 30 in the evening on UTC +7. Furthermore, we just have two or three lessons every week. If you join, you will spend not too much time in class. And the schedule depends on you because we have to fill the form first. It is all the information that I want to give to you. See you at the class. Best wishes,
Dear my friend,

I was
so
excited when I receive your email
because
a long time ago we did not have time to chat together. I am immediately writing this letter to inform you that on the
first
Monday
next
month, I am studying an English club near my
house
and hope you can
join
with me.

To
begin
with, English is an
important
more and more and I
usually
can't speak
fluence
when I am trying to speak English with someone else.
Consequently
, I decide to
join
an English club. I wish I can
improve
my
English speaking
skill
after I complete this course.

Secondly
, the second reason which
makes
me confirm to register this course is we will have a teacher
come
from
Venezuela and
he has more experience to teach
people
don’t
use
English as a
first
language.
Moreover
, we have an assistant who will
explain
anything whatever students want to know. And don’t worry about documents or books, they have already
enough
for all members in classes.

Last
but
not least, this course has two timetables for each
class
: this one is available at 9. 00 in the morning and another will
start
at 7. 30 in the evening on UTC +7.
Furthermore
, we
just
have two or three lessons every week. If you
join
, you will spend not too much time in
class
. And the schedule depends on you
because
we
have to
fill the form
first
. It is all the information that I want to give to you.
See
you at the
class
.

Best wishes,
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IELTS letter write letter to your friend and let him know about the English club which you will join next month

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
261 words
6.0
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