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Letter to local newspaper Airport to expand, increase the number of light Where you live Describe the problem Give reasons why you do not want this development

Letter to local newspaper Airport to expand, increase the number of light Where you live Describe the problem Give reasons why you do not want this development 0AaJl
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to you to show my disagreement on the development of local Airport at Delhi. As this project can cause many negative consequences to the local residents. I live near Delhi Airport and I am hoping that you will publish an article in protest of this project. The development can cause multiple issues for the hundreds of old age and children part of more than 4000 residents in total, living nearby. The existing air traffic already causing too much of turbulence and noise which is making the life difficult of everybody here, students, at the time of examinations not able to concentrate and sleep, the sick and old people are already living in noisy environment here. Moreover the air traffic in night disturbed the most. Because of multiple airlines operating from this airport, too much of ground traffic exists which creates difficulty in day to day life. Expanding the airport will consider acquiring our beautiful park which is used by the population living nearby. Moreover it will disturb the environment in this area as all the trees will be removed. As a result of environment disturbances, pollution will increase. Airport authority also has plan to increase the number flights after expansion which will add to the existing disturbances. Considering all these issues everyone in our local society is against this project of Airport development. Hence request you to publish an article in protest of this Airport expansion project favouring the local residents. I am looking forward to hear from you. Yours faithfully Tahir Saife
Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing to you to
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show
my disagreement on the development of
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local
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Airport
at Delhi.
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As
this project can cause
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many
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negative
The usual preposition to use after "consequences" is not "to". Did you mean "consequences of", "consequences for", or "consequences on"?
consequences to
the
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local
residents. I
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live
near Delhi
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Airport and
I am hoping that you will publish an article in protest of this project.

The development can cause multiple issues for the hundreds of
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
old
age and children part of more than 4000 residents in total, living nearby. The existing air traffic already causing too much of turbulence and noise which is making the life difficult of everybody here, students, at the time of examinations not able to concentrate and sleep, the sick and
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old
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people
are already living in noisy environment here.
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Moreover
the air traffic in night disturbed the most.
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Because
of multiple airlines operating from this
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airport
, too much of ground traffic exists which creates difficulty in day to day life.

Expanding the
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airport
will consider acquiring our
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beautiful
park which is
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used
by the population living nearby.
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Moreover
it will disturb the environment in this area as all the trees will
be removed
.
As a result
of environment disturbances, pollution will increase.
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Airport
authority
also
has plan to increase the number flights after expansion which will
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add
to the existing disturbances.

Considering all these issues everyone in our
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local
society is against this project of
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Airport
development.
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Hence
request you to publish an article in protest of this
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Airport
expansion project
Possible spelling mistake. 'favouring' is British English.
favouring
the
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local
residents.

I am looking forward
In the grammatical structure 'look + forward + to + verb', the verb 'to' is used with the gerund: "to hearing".
to hear
from you.

Yours
faithfully


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Tahir
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Saife
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IELTS letter Letter to local newspaper Airport to expand, increase the number of light Where you live Describe the problem Give reasons why you do not want this development

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
257 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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