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Letter to friend to help in find peert time job in abroad

Letter to friend to help in find peert time job in abroad 0wG1Q

Dear saifhow are you. hope everything is going well. it has been long time i see you. I am pleased to tell you that i am coming to Canada next month for my Bachelors in science. I got admission at Lambton collage and my campus is in Sarnia. I heard from many students that its hard to find job in Sarnia. You have been living there for last two years and i knew you will have a lot of connection there. Well my course will be of 2 years with 4 semesters and i need to get part time job over there. This will help to get an experience in Canadian company and help to know more about culture and job field in Canada. Moreover, this will help me to get entered in my field and help me to follow up with policies and procedures at workplace. I am pretty sure your guidance will help me to find a better job. I will be thankful if you could provide me more details about how to find job and which site is best to apply for. Give my respect to aunt and uncle and i will see you there when i will get there. Regardssandhu

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Regardssandhu