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Letter to friend to help in find peert time job in abroad

Letter to friend to help in find peert time job in abroad 0wG1Q
Dear saifhow are you. hope everything is going well. it has been long time i see you. I am pleased to tell you that i am coming to Canada next month for my Bachelors in science. I got admission at Lambton collage and my campus is in Sarnia. I heard from many students that its hard to find job in Sarnia. You have been living there for last two years and i knew you will have a lot of connection there. Well my course will be of 2 years with 4 semesters and i need to get part time job over there. This will help to get an experience in Canadian company and help to know more about culture and job field in Canada. Moreover, this will help me to get entered in my field and help me to follow up with policies and procedures at workplace. I am pretty sure your guidance will help me to find a better job. I will be thankful if you could provide me more details about how to find job and which site is best to apply for. Give my respect to aunt and uncle and i will see you there when i will get there. Regardssandhu
Dear
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saifhow
are you.
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hope
everything is going well.
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it
has been long time
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i
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see
you. I am
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pleased
to
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tell
you that
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i
am coming to Canada
next
month for my Bachelors in science. I
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got
admission at
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Lambton
collage and my campus is in
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Sarnia
.
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I
heard from
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many
students that
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its
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hard
to find
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job
in
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Sarnia
. You have been living there for last two years and
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i
knew you will have
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a lot of
connection there. Well my course will be of 2 years with 4 semesters and
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i
need to
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get
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part time
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job
over there. This will
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help
to
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get
an experience in Canadian
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company
and
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help
to know more about culture and
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job
field in Canada.
Moreover
, this will
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help
me to
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get
entered in my field and
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help
me to follow up with policies and procedures at workplace. I am pretty sure your guidance will
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help me to find
a better
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job
. I will be thankful if you could provide me more
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details
about how to find
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job
and which site is best to apply for. Give my respect to aunt and uncle and
Did you mean "I"?
i
will
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see
you there when
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i
will
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get
there.
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Regardssandhu

IELTS letter Letter to friend to help in find peert time job in abroad

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
203 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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