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Letter to friend for recently move to new house explaining why you have moved,describe the new house,invite the friend to come and visit

Letter to friend for recently move to new house explaining why you have moved, describe the new house, invite the friend to come and visit Ol2Pp

Dear Dave, I am writing this letter to let you know that I have moved from my previous location Vancouver to British territory due to my job transfer. This was bit difficult to relocate from origin but considering change is must I am digesting this change. My new house is in half hectare and is very big in comparison to my old one. There is a very big lush green garden in front of my house and all type of markets and even general amenities like school, hospital and amusement parks are nearby and this is really advantageous. The new house has four bedrooms, one big hall and three washrooms & one double side kitchen. Along with this, it has covered parking for two big cars. Also there is a big balcony behind the house to have a walk within the house. All these things compensating the loss of leaving the old house. Anyhow I'm here to invite you on the housewarming occasion planned next week followed by lunch party, You are co-cordially invited with family without any excuse. Thank you.

Dear Dave,

I am writing this letter to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 you know that I have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocated
moved
 from my previous location Vancouver to British territory due to my job transfer. This was Consider using a past participle here: "bitten".bitten
bit
 difficult to relocate from origin This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 considering This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
 I am digesting this This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
.

My new You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingboxapartmentdwellingresidenceshack
house
 is in half hectare and is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withhugeenormousfullimmensetremendoushefty
big
in comparison
 to my This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
 one. There is a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withhugeenormousfullimmensetremendoushefty
big
 lush green garden in front of my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingboxapartmentdwellingresidenceshack
house
 and all type of markets and even general amenities like school, hospital and amusement parks are nearby and this is really
 advantageous. The new You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingboxapartmentdwellingresidenceshack
house
 has four bedrooms, one You use this word too often, consider replacing it withhugeenormousfullimmensetremendoushefty
big
 hall and three washrooms & one double side kitchen. Along with this, it has covered parking for two You use this word too often, consider replacing it withhugeenormousfullimmensetremendoushefty
big
 cars. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Also,
Also
 there is a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withhugeenormousfullimmensetremendoushefty
big
 balcony behind the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingboxapartmentdwellingresidenceshack
house
 to have a walk within the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingboxapartmentdwellingresidenceshack
house
. All these things compensating the loss of leaving the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
.

Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Anyhow,
Anyhow
 I'm here to invite you on the housewarming occasion planned next
 week followed by lunch party, You are co-cordially
 invited with family without any excuse.

Thank you. 