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Letter to friend for invitation in forgein company

Letter to friend for invitation in forgein company mBLK
Dear Sofia, Hey, what's up? Hope, you would be fit and fine in your life. I am writing this letter to invite you to join us on trip to Shimla. I and Raman, both are enjoying the weather of hill stations and has cut down the heat of plain area. We missed you during our stay as there are lot of things to explore and innumerate opportunities to enchant the beauty of nature. As far I know, you have completed your thesis so you are also planning outing as us. Initially, we were thinking to include you in our plan but your hectic schedule dont permit you to join us. So, in hurry, we boarded to our destiny as tickets were already booked and there was no logic to waste the money. But, now, during trip, we are missing your company and indeed humourous attitude that make a situation more enjoyable. No worries to plan the tour, as I am sending the train tickets of friday morning which will depart you to shimla station where both of us will welcome you. So, come and join us soon. We are eagerly waiting for your company. Missing you a lot! With regards, Sonia.
Dear Sofia, Hey, what's up? Hope, you would
be fit
and fine in your life. I am writing this letter to invite you to
join
us on trip to
Shimla
. I and
Raman
, both are enjoying the weather of hill stations and has
cut
down the heat of plain area. We missed you during our stay as there are
lot of
things to explore and innumerate opportunities to enchant the beauty of nature. As far I know, you have completed your thesis
so
you are
also
planning outing as us.
Initially
, we were thinking to include you in our plan
but
your hectic schedule
dont
permit you to
join
us.
So
, in hurry, we boarded to our destiny as tickets were already booked and there was no logic to waste the money.
But
,
now
, during trip, we are missing your
company
and
indeed
humourous
attitude that
make
a situation more enjoyable. No worries to plan the tour, as I am sending the train tickets of
friday
morning which will depart you to
shimla
station where both of us will welcome you.
So
,
come
and
join
us
soon
. We are
eagerly
waiting for your
company
. Missing you a lot! With regards, Sonia.
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IELTS letter Letter to friend for invitation in forgein company

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
201 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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