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Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course. Write a letter to the college enrolment officer. In your letter explain why you are writing describe your circumstances ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enrol in the course

Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course. Write a letter to the college enrolment officer. In your letter explain why you are writing describe your circumstances ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enrol in the course BogX
Dear Sir or Madam, This letter is to inquire about the computer training which your institude is offering to invidividuals who have completed a primary course. I am keen to learn about the computer language along with the software development programme offered by your organisation. I would like to clear some doubts about the timing, fee and duration. I am currently working for B&B Company located in downtown London as a assistant programmer in the research and devlopment deparment. Therefore, my position requires me to have a accurate and precise knowledge about the basic functioning of the coding. Unfortunately, I do not have a primary certificate in the elementary course but I have done an add-on course in C++ and HTML language during by secondary education. Kindly consider my situation and if possbile, grant me permition to join the training. Awaitng your propt response. Yours faithfully, H. G
Dear Sir or Madam,

This letter is to inquire about the computer training which your
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institude
is offering to
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invidividuals
who have completed a primary course.

I am keen to learn about the computer language along with the software development
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programme
offered by your
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organisation
. I would like to
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clear
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some
doubts about the timing, fee and duration.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
am
currently
working for B&B
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Company
located in downtown London as
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a
assistant programmer in the research and
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devlopment
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deparment
.
Therefore
, my position requires me to have
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a
accurate and precise knowledge about the basic functioning of the coding.

Unfortunately, I do not have a primary certificate in the elementary course
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but
I have done an
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
add
-on course in C++ and HTML language during by secondary education. Kindly consider my situation and if
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possbile
, grant me
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permition
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
join
the training.

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Awaitng
your
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propt
response.

Yours
faithfully
,

H. G

IELTS letter Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course. Write a letter to the college enrolment officer. In your letter explain why you are writing describe your circumstances ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enrol in the course

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
147 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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