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Giving news letter about visiting to Antalia

Giving news letter about visiting to Antalia BwPEm

Dear MumHow are you? I hope you are fine. I have got so much news to tell you that I don‘t where to begin! Visiting to Antalia is reallt fantastic journey so far. Antalia is absolutely pretty town with the most wonderful place and an area of the most amazing, lively natural beauty. Today, my friends and I went to the beach to breathe the sea air and take a walk. There is lovely beach that is quiet and private, away from people, buildings and roads. In other words, there is a lovely secluded beach. When we got there, we sailed on a yacht. On a sailing, if you close your eyes and take a breathe deeply you can feel a differently relief and light relaxation. As you can see, it is horribly enjoyable. Besides that, two days ago, we stayed at the hotel which is located in the heart of the city. Our hotel was in really good condition and also the stuff of the hotel were friendly. Almost, every night we had opportunity to go out and walk around the city. The appearance of the town is very wonderful because I saw the houses painted pink and blue and where there are exiotic flowers everywhere. In other words, it is picturesque town. I have never seen anything like that before. Our journey will end soon, we return home. Till then take care. With best wishesSaodat

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