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Complaint letter about the problem in the college dormitory

Complaint letter about the problem in the college dormitory ewBMO

Dear Mr Abdullaev I am writing to complain about the arrangement of living in the room of college dormitory. Allow me to elaborate on exactly why I would like the room I live in to be changed to another one. I am a second year student on Foreign languages in the college and I am sharing the room with the same year student on Musoc and Art. Because of his area of study, he plays several types of musical instruments very loudly, sometimes till midnight. This gives a problem to my study. I can not concentrate while musical instrument is being played in high volume. As a result, I am not able to finish my assignments in their time. Another issue that would be interrupting me is that he goes out with his friends frequently and he returns very late and I have to unlock the door at midnight. I have argued a few times the problem occurred with him but he did not pay attention much. As a result, I suggest that you will rearrange my room and make a result to this issue. I hope this matter will receive your immediate attention and be resolved positively. Your sincerely student Sherzod Hasanov.

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Abdullaev
 I am writing to complain about the arrangement of living in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
room
 of college dormitory. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
Allow
 me to elaborate on exactly why I would like the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
room
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live
 in to be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
 to another one. I am a second year student on Foreign languages in the Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).college, and
college and
 I am sharing the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
room
 with the same year student on Possible spelling mistake found.MusicMu soc
Musoc
 and Art. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
Because
 of his area of study, he plays several types of musical instruments This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
loudly
, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :in some instances
sometimes
 till midnight. This gives a problem to my study. I can not concentrate while musical instrument is being played
 in high volume. As a result
, I am not able to finish my assignments in their time. Another issue that would be interrupting me is that he goes out with his friends Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).frequently, and
frequently and
 he returns This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 late and I This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 unlock the door at midnight. I have argued a few times the problem occurred with him This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 he did not pay attention much. As a result
, I suggest that you will rearrange my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
room
 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 a result to this issue. I hope this matter will receive your immediate attention and be resolved
positively
. Your sincerely
 student Possible spelling mistake found.SherwoodScherzoScherzosHerod
Sherzod
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Hasanov
. 